Performance piece

For my performance piece, I observed my friend Caroline while she was getting dressed for a dinner. I thought that it was cool observing her and I want to make sure that I add a lot of detail to the piece. The way I plan on making sure I have a lot of detail in the piece is write the piece how I would normally write it. Next, I plan on reviewing it and any place where I can add description, I will add it. I think it is going to be easier to discover where details can be added if I re-read the piece and then add it. I hope that makes sense!