Sunday, September 27, 2009

The Pharmacy

Things were quiet in the stark-white, hospital-like pharmacy. Few people roamed about in this florescent, white-walled dungeon as Liz waited patiently behind the counter.

“Can I have some needles?” asked a pale, thin man in a baseball cap—his hands shaking.

“Do you have a prescription?” asked 17-year-old Liz, wearing her blue jacket with a red embroidered “K-mart.”


The man grew angry and defensive, hurling a slew of expletives at a frightened Liz, who describes herself at the age of 17 as naïve. “I’d never been cussed at before,” she says.


At this point, Liz, who was a pharmacist technician, decided to get a pharmacist to intervene. Eventually, however, the cops had to come. Even with their help, however, Liz was still shaken up. After the incident, she says, “I ran to my car like a maniac.”


On another occasion, Liz was stocking shelves. She was minding her own business, placing item after item in its proper place, when she was interrupted by a tall, thin, African-American male in his forties. He wanted some Viagra samples.


Liz, knowing that samples of such things were not usually given out, asked “Why?” To which the man responded, “Because I want to try them out on you.”


There is a reason why Liz describes this as the worst job experience she’s ever had.

6 comments:

  1. I think there could have been more details about the people and even the job, the smell of the pharmacy, what it looked like, everything.

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  2. I like how you have multiple examples of how this job wasn't my favorite. I really enjoyed the quotes, you presented the scenario exactly how I picture it in my mind to this day! :-(

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  3. This seems like an awful job!! I liked the descriptions in it and I liked how you sparadically put in quotes that she had said.

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  4. I think description was lost somewhere. The end could use more, but the dialouge really brought the story to life.

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  5. The first anecdote gives me a good description of how Lizz reacted to the scenario, but the second (the Viagra incident) doesn't. I want to know how Liz responded to this bizarre situation.
    These great quotes are integrated really well into this story.

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  6. Nice replay of that scene. I like the narrative-like lead, and I think you could have stretched that out more, before we get to the part where Liz seeks help.

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