I liked the article for the most part. It kept my interest. I liked that the article was based on the woman's life, but also mentioned the economic struggle, including Charlotte's unemployment rate. After briefing on the economic situation, the feature turns back to her life growing up, singing. Quotes were well used and not over-done. I mostly liked the quotes from her that were worked into the author's descriptions of her life, such as:
She cut her hair -- formerly a "huge Afro." She muted her wardrobe,
changed her diet from "a lot of berries and no meat," and accepted a
job at Wachovia.
Some good points Lizzie. Sounds like a colorful profile of this woman. Next time pls provide a link so we can also enjoy reading this feature.
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