Since we are not meeting as a class tomorrow, I am using the time to go to Grateful Bread for a followup interview. This time I'm going to focus on talking to customers about their experiences at the restaurant. I'm hoping to get some personal stories that will add interest to my feature.
I'm also going to take more notes on the atmosphere of the restaurant. It is an extremely colorful restaurant, with tons of books, art work on the walls, vibrant colors, and knick knacks. I want really detailed description so that readers can see the place without actually being there.
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If you can get that description in there Camara, that would be great. Because readers are going to try to visualize this place and the more details we add, the more realistic you make it for your audience. Good luck!
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